Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Kiss Kiss Comments

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Kiss kiss kiss I will
Again and again hold you
Touch you taste you kiss
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Forrest Hainline
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2019

last line: did you mean to type " ...your kiss" ? ? anybody in particular in mind? ? bri :) i liked reading your PH bio.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2016

touch you and taste you.. showing the intensity of desire and love. thank you for this poem. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 28 September 2014

A lovely three liner.

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Dominic Isaia 13 June 2014

I think the last line would've sounded better if it had said Touch you taste you kiss you

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