Sunday, July 24, 2011

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Elevated to a plain of total commitment,
Beyond words of their unrestrained indulgence in sensual pleasures.
A mutual consent as they drew closer,
Arms open in a sign of submission.
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sidney hall (The Mad Poet)
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Romeo Della Valle 24 July 2011

Wow! What a steaming and powerful poem which reminds me of two poems I wrote sometime ago titled: A SUMMER'S NIGHT and AN EROTIC LOVE. While reading this hair raising write my room started to get hotter and I was wondering if the Air Conditioner was set right. I went and checked it out and it was alright! Then I stopped and thought, wow, I realized it was your poem the cause! Bravo! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World, you got the TALENT! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...

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