Kiss And Curse Comments

Kiss is neither sin nor curse but a sign of love poet from mouth despite words of love.

hrow stones at me! Kill me; death I shall serve humbly. I gave a free rein of my domain, what a sweet and heart touchim poem but there is a question that.. you being a good poet should not be hit by stones but a bouquet of flowers to present..I know you are hurt by some one..I saw the poem in which the conscience of your sweet nation was attaked with some hurting words..and I got very for it..and say..we are people of peace to promote humanity with respect..not with the way that poet did.. I appreciate your work and really the way you write and my respects for your ideas and intentions.. best of luck and never care for those who dont know how to respect others..and keep your sweet poems writing on and on..10/10

wow...depth intense words as ever...galing talaga...!

more sinned against than sinning? ...strong emotions strong words on sin...10

a power packed poem..words flow with strength and emotion...great

This is such a strong poem ma'am.. I loved the kind of words you have used in this piece.. The dynamism of your words can pierce many hearts.. Splendid piece of work.. A++ loves Shan

Words have much depth, such vividness is expressed.

Powerful poem to read! Force of words makes one feel its intensity very well!

So strong, so powerful are the words from your mouth The poem was executed brilliantly.. Thanks alot 10+ This was a great pleasure to read

such a powerful and enigmatic verse...........kudos

a kiss, in sceonds i live, summing up a thousand years. a second, eternity to cast off the stones; for now i'm humbly blessed; to know all of life's joys (and agonies) , all in a second. What is time, throw stones at me, if you will; my sins therein crushed, reveal the core of my soul, eternity bound in blissful joy. Give me seconds then, and my death announced to yester years, shall today be consumed, into one living second. oh, this write leaves me breathless, Catrina. so good! breathlessly 10 mark

powerful almost extreme great write 10

Kill me; death I shall serve humbly. I gave a free rein of my domain, A momentary kiss to taste the earthly bliss; .it is emergence of inner beauty with strong resolve to have admitted any sins.... it is as inflicting slef injuriy on the sinscommited unknowgly... well knit words with sincerity and with so muchhonesy in approach.... i admire the qualaity in poetess....10 read mine i am disgrace..... goback..... welcome.... visting helll

flowing...flowing...flowing with depth...with brilliancy with strength... your words are so striking...enough to knock out our mind... but flowing with humility... great concept, my friend... no one can cast the first stone to stone you...for Jesus said, 'Whoever is without sin, will be the first one to cast the stone.... Who will dare? (smile) Your piece flows with great significance..of great meanings... a very important piece to read.....worth reflecting-for....GREAT! ! ! ! with a very striking finale ' I am pawned....I shall redeemed' and that's the most important....after the sin...a renewal.... 10++++++++ Lovelots, Maia