Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.0

I remember you first kiss
It was electric
It took me to a climax
Then it released me slowly
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dierks emerick
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* Sunprincess * 19 July 2015

........nicely expressed..thanks for sharing ★

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Eileen Davidson 10 November 2009

nice choice of words, powerful metaphors

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George Mencken 10 November 2009

expressed very well. thanks for shaing

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Edward Parsley 05 November 2009

very deep and beautiful... very skillfully writtten as well.. 10+

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Roxane Sarandon 04 November 2009

A wonderful write............full of ideas.........

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