Sunday, January 11, 2015

Kiss Comments

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They kiss shamelessly
under the sun.
they kiss endlessly
for having fun.
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shafeeqrahman rahman
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 August 2017

their nerves of shame have chopped and marred why is kiss a sin? here in europe all kiss publically expressing their love or fun ror just. no one questions them.. in public gardens yongsters go naked here. not even police questions it. ok thank you dear poet. for this poem.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 February 2015

Surely it is a blot and shame.nice writing.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 February 2015

A good social message on propriety in public places pertains in this poem. Likes.

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