Monday, August 5, 2013

Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness falls
Emptiness around
The stars above.
I look at you,
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Vlad Mutuleanu
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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2013

Your poem is beautiful! Simple narration of feelings is its real beauty. 'A simple kiss Is all i want.' Very simply told, very nice!

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Liliana ~el 19 October 2013

A feeling so strong but intangible. Almost a forbidden fruit, the sweetest and most beautiful of all, forever untouchable though right there in your eyes.

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