Kingdom Come Comments

Coming of kingdom with love and beauty has power of attraction. This poem is really an interesting poem you have well written.

Thanks for sharing this sonnet with us. I like the repetition of words beginning with 'K' at the start of each line, giving the whole poem more power. You show how important karma is in your country.

A vital role! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xGreat write.Enjoyed reading it very much 11 Jul 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xSo deep, Sir. 28 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

Another wonderful poem with a great message, another poem in which every line starts with the same letter............10.

the kingdom is used in different fold to teach the readers to follow the right path...well done

O.K, dear Kelly, you believe in using this life to be kindness, compassionate and helping other. This is good resolve and it will go with soul to next birth. Many thanks for your valuable comment.

Karma is the factor that rules the humans.Loved reading the poem

Such a magnificent work. There may be equality in the hereafter, but that may not preclude judgment...A great poem.

I do not know what to believe in as far as an afterlife is concerned, but I do believe in using this life to be kind and compassionate and helping others. An excellent and instructional poem my friend. Peace