Thursday, May 22, 2008

King Of Kings Comments

Rating: 5.0

A new wind blows from the east
Extinguishes the fires of sacked cities
Awakes murdered victims
Wipes the tears
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Jing Jing 04 June 2008

what a wonderful piece of work

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Abha Sharma 28 May 2008

a nice gesture towards the freedom of belief and understanding, the lines justify our rights as humans...May peace and joy prevail everywhere... Abha

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C.R. Clark 26 May 2008

A very powerful and and thought provoking write, my friend. Calls for peace, liberation and tolerance are always in order, but especially in this day and age. Excellent read. Thank you Richard

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C. P. Sharma 24 May 2008

Persian Nightingale sings songs of peace and freedom to follow the wisdom of the East. A very apt meterical message in the present context with allusion to history.

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M M 24 May 2008

A new kind of poem here, very well written, describing a historical and at the same time timeless and real hope. A fine work! 10

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Tsira Goge 23 May 2008

' shall never resolve on war! ' ......................................... It is really worthy poems, Thank you for this... Nightingale Tsira

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Lynda Robson 23 May 2008

I have never heard of Cyrus the Great, but you have written a great tribute to him in this historical poem, thanks for sharing with us, Lynda xx

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... ... 22 May 2008

A historical poem, a work of art! ! ! Bravo! ! !

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Thad Wilk 22 May 2008

The King of Kings will liberate, no longer can the people wait! *10*! ! Great read, very well written! ! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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~ Jon London ~ 22 May 2008

Persian my friend, This is thought provoking and educationally brilliant, I'm amazed by the capture the visual experience through out this remarkable write of your is exquisite.........Worthy of top marks my friend *10+* Best wishes Jon

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