King Of Kings Comments

Awwwww! ! ! ! this is too much for the heart...it is a reality for many of us who forget God when we live in the world and not in Jesus. you are great elena

A great prayer to say to the Most High. It shows me of the Lords love and that he is my KIng.

I do like this very much. Its content is soothing and it comes out so smoothly Linda

Such a sweet understanding to talk to God as you do you must be close to him. 'Forgive all my wasted days', when we just didn't do what he called us to. How refreshing to share with others. Phebe

Jesus's promise as a filter against Old Testament rigidity inspires many, in all areas. That He can inspire such creativity in you is a testament to His gift. If every Christian saw the world with the wonder your poetry conveys, we'd have 'em all converted in a week.

I thought I was innoculated against religeon at birth....... It must have been at 13 with my BCG! You have just caused me to recall a prayer I was taught as a child, I did not understand it at the time..... Gentle Jesus meek and mild Look on me a little child Pity my Simplicity And suffer me to come to thee Amen. Do people still say prayers?

colin, this is such a great poem! ! full of passion and sincereity! ! definitely a heart felt prayer. beautifully penned! ! thanks for sharing! ! ! ! ~gracie

This is truely beautiful and comes across as absolutely sincere, one of the most moving and brilliant poems that I have read Love duncan X

Brilliant, honestly a great prayer i will be looking out for more of your work

I THINK I AM NOT WORTHY TO MAKE ANY COMMENT ABOUT THIS PRAYER.

A very warm write and a good message flows from the content, we must have faith Chris 10 Regards

like a prayer...but nicely written verses...very good. Best Regards, Ency Bearis