King Of Hearts Or Koh Comments

life, a game all through... every game has rules if played fair. you have to be a sportsman, sportsmanship lies in playing the hand you have been dealt with to the best of your ability. do we have lifelines like a joker to make a trail... there in comes the skill. a very thought provoking write. however, in life we don't have the option if dealt a bad hand, to say I pack like in teen patti. 10 Mamta

Life Cards should be manipulated and maneuvered humanely otherwise with high card value will loose the Card- Game-Life’ Best and indeed Sir… 10+ hf Ms. Nivedita UK

A tale of a gambler playing a romantic game of adoring and caring, sweetly crafted in an ink of red, painting the world with 7 wonderful colours......I loved this piece most....so sweet. Heart

Very true that 'Life is a gamble game'.I give you 10 points.

Romanticism using Cards....very imaginative....and unique...definitely a nice one. I would say 9.5 points...Thank you for sharing.

Lovely slab sir.. i liked it.. totally.. I actually sensed a lot from this poem... i read this poem twice loudly as the words rhymed me to a music shade of life which relates to me strongly :) thanks for sharing sir./.. keep writing

Flows amazingly. Metaphorical poetry at its best. You have shuffled your cards very well sir! 10+

very interesting and eclectically joyous yet it flows like episode by the life deciphering the code of love, quite ingenious of luscious glow by the imagery of cards, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

'Shield you from menacing spades' I love this line. So cleverly woven in the cards. Thank you Venkat I am enjoying your muse.

quite the game we play...nicely written.

Beautiful images mixed with cleverly playful metaphors...Coach

We never know if it's a good hand or bad hand, but the game must be played, the cards all before us, which one will you play... Andrew 10

Masterly 'melodrama' … beautiful 'scenes' … in game main creative development … 10!

well..tsira, a king a trump card and at times a joker too...our attempts in life are always to come out winning, bluffing we or not...

Original poems... For successful games it is obligatory to bluff... And I think to you it not on a shower... Whether not so? Tsira

A great read. The way in which the game of cards is compared with life is impeccable

a real poet can find poetry on anything! wonderful piece of poetry Keshavji. *10*

though i have litle idea of playing 'cards' but it is a nice poem depicting luck and game of chance in life...thanx for sharing

I was going to say the same as Ian, however it is an excellent poem, and life is indeed a gamble, a game of chance, and we don't get to choose which hand we are given 10 Lynda xxx

Kesav, you came up 'trumps' with this one. Ian