I marvelled
and stood in bewilderment
When it was dark and raining
When all at once
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marvelled and stood in bewilderment....................beautifully penned.10.
Hi! Dulakshi, This is truly beautiful! Fine deep thoughts well expressed. Like your similes very much! All the best, Joanna
hi Dulakshi.....this one is soo very beatuiful...I should say it has Srilankan flavour in it...soo very refreshing, relaxes the mind...and highly enjoyable 10+++
hi Dulakshi u r one with your environs and enjoy nature....what a vivid pic u painted for us...tropics and all with a solid message for the good old values...an the refrain... they dont make em they used to.. cheers...keep it up
I love your poems it is nice to read Thousands of blooms appear like our unborn children, The king coconuts are like our grandchildren..... It's a unique scene, that's vividly
I am enchanted by your work, it takes me to a divine place. Kind regards Marie