Saturday, March 28, 2009

King Coconut Tree In A Dream Comments

Rating: 3.4

I marvelled
and stood in bewilderment
When it was dark and raining
When all at once
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Dulakshi Wakista
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Marie Bliss 04 April 2010

I am enchanted by your work, it takes me to a divine place. Kind regards Marie

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

marvelled and stood in bewilderment....................beautifully penned.10.

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Joanna Ratnam 18 September 2009

Hi! Dulakshi, This is truly beautiful! Fine deep thoughts well expressed. Like your similes very much! All the best, Joanna

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 May 2009

hi Dulakshi.....this one is soo very beatuiful...I should say it has Srilankan flavour in it...soo very refreshing, relaxes the mind...and highly enjoyable 10+++

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Saadat Tahir 11 May 2009

hi Dulakshi u r one with your environs and enjoy nature....what a vivid pic u painted for us...tropics and all with a solid message for the good old values...an the refrain... they dont make em they used to.. cheers...keep it up

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Kee Thampi 11 May 2009

I love your poems it is nice to read Thousands of blooms appear like our unborn children, The king coconuts are like our grandchildren..... It's a unique scene, that's vividly

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Emma7 J 28 March 2009

nice poem and beautiful meaning keep on

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