Monday, August 17, 2015

"King Bri! " He Croaked.....[humor/Humour; 'love'/Sex; Inter-Species Relationship; Fairly-A-Tale; Medium; Inspired By A 'friend'] Comments

Rating: 4.3

NO lowly frog ‘prince' am I, my dear,
but a KING! Have I made that clear! ?
AND I'm not so lonely as you may think,
as little female frogs lead me to the brink …
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Bri Edwards
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James McLain 18 June 2023

Five stars you have from me, different.

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

Wow, I LOVE this, MY POEM. Would you believe that I've now got fruman grandkids? ? ? I call them Tad(pole) 1,2,3,4, ......59, and 60.

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

In my Poet's Notes, I believe the 'wonderful gal' was Lorraine (aka Lora) Colon, a fine poet and friend here, alas no longer active here, but I believe still alive, MAYBE IN THE BOG?

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

Another decent 'frog' poem is A Talking Frog ~, by PH poet M. Asim Nehal Sunday, from June 18,2023. Does it sound 'familiar' to you too? bri : )

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Valsa George 25 August 2015

What a froggy you are Bri! Though bawdy, I cannot help reading this poem a second time! Perhaps this is one of your most 'outrageously humorous' poems! So you are going to be sire to countless 'frumans'! Frumans.... I suppose is your coinage! My croaking may have caused you ire, but once we’ve started, you’ll never tire … of my froggy friendliness. I’ll be your sire, and satisfy your ever-wished-for desire.............. Very interesting lines! How can I award you less than 10 for making us entertained so much!

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

Oh, Valsa, my sweet child. Of course I miss you, though I've heard of/from you via our mutual friend (who is still here,8 years later, Bharati Nayak. : ) bri aka eagle eye, or was it hawk eye?

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Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

You CAN'T! ! ! ! Thank you dear Valsa-child. ;))))))) bri

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Darlene Walsh 17 August 2015

It took me a few moments to figure out 'frumans'. I checked the dictionary first, then it hit me. Frog + Human = frumans. Oh, what a busy little froggy you have been, especially with your unusual anatomy, LOL. Very entertaining, enjoyable and nice rhyming. ' I’ll be your sire, and satisfy your ever-wished-for desire. ' Would this sound better as 'every-wished-for desire.'?

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

Darlene, Darlene, you are missed (by me anyway) on PH. Here is 'wishing you well'. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

No it WOULD NOT be better. It WOULD mean something else however. ;)

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Kelly Kurt 17 August 2015

If there was any doubt that you are a nut (not a tree offering) , it has been removed.: -)

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

Kelly Kurt! Another name missed on PH since 'the changes' of a few years ago. ; (

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Jak Black 17 August 2015

The mind boggles. What are you on, Bri. Could do with some myself. Haha. This is one of your better, and most humorous poems. Really enjoyed this one. You do tend to brag a little tthough. Haha.

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2023

'at a boy, Jak! ! Watch your mailbox. bri : ) Is a 'reply' better late than never? ? ? ? bri It only took 8 years for me to reply. ;)

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