Thursday, December 25, 2008

King Bobby Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to people who love chess)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Lynda Robson 02 January 2009

Great tribute to Bobby Fischer, the king of chess, 10 Lynda xxx

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Aldo Kraas 29 December 2008

This poem is not bad at all

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 28 December 2008

Great write! I like it.

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Carol Rhodes 28 December 2008

AHMAD, ANOTHER GREAT LESSON. CHESS SHOULD BE INTRODUCED AT A VERY EARLY AGE AND THE BRAIN THEN, AS SCIENTISTS CALCULATED, IS THE WINNER, INDEED. ONE OF THE BEST LEARNING TOOLS TO ENHANCE OUR AWARENESS, OUR PATIENCE, AND LOGICAL REASONING/ANALYZATION POWERS. AND, IN AN EERIE WAY, WHILE SO FOCUSED ON AN INANIMATE PROJECT, TO ENABLE US TO MULTI-TASK AND TO COME TO A LEVEL OF PERCEPTION THAT HELPS US TO TAKE IN THE WORLD AT A GLANCE. SO, SITTING DOWN FOR HOURS ISN'T ALWAYS A WASTE OF LIFE AND TIME, YES? YOU TOOK ME ON ANOTHER DELIGHTFUL JOURNEY, AHMAD. MY BEST, CAROL

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Kite Remedy 28 December 2008

that feels like playing chess.. genuine and smooth idea.. great..

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Reshma Ramesh 28 December 2008

amazing diff write...........well penned

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I love the set up of this poem.. Great work KRISTA

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Exploded with esoteric excellence. Keep writing

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Ben Gieske 27 December 2008

This is certainly a fast paced poem full of a lot of twists and turns, unexpected moves. A unique way of opening it with chess locations. I am sure that someone more familiar with all the names, moves, etc. will be able to enjoy it even more than I have.

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Ency Bearis 27 December 2008

check MATE! ! ..triumphant earned the Grand Master..well described..

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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very Different and Very Good

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Thad Wilk 26 December 2008

Wonderful poem an dedication, all the right moves here, artful positioning an calculations start to finish capturing in it's imagery throughout. - checkmate, a winner for sure... Best regards! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Kassem Oude 26 December 2008

Dear friend, I should be frank with you, as it appears of comments your piece in not too attrative, you should be brief and clearer. It was too long, It would rather be written as an assay in a magazine of chest players

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Indira Babbellapati 26 December 2008

may the soul rest in peace!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 26 December 2008

I don't know chess and so I am not in a position to comment on this poem. But still I find this poem sounds something fine.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 26 December 2008

good poem, i never new that chess cuold bring that emotions

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Min Sia 26 December 2008

I may not a goop chess player..bit I agree of the characteristics a player should have.. The mental capabilities..the tactics..should be unbeatable..almost..should be unlimited... Great poem! ..

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Linda Moore 26 December 2008

Chess, competitive calculated moves, strategic thinking, anticipating your opponents mind and moves taking deep concentration. People who can do this are always a little different than the rest....

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Joseph Poewhit 26 December 2008

Quick calculating minds play good chess gaims. When you see a 12 year old child master, you ponder the depths of thoughts. Like teen hackers who break into the unbreakable. Makes one wonder? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? CHECKMATE

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Fay Slimm 26 December 2008

Like Fiona says - - I too am unfamiar with the game Ahmad... but I can see your own enthusiasm and commend you for a well written effort......... from Fay a 10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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