Friday, July 20, 2012

King Big Head ..... (Limerick) Comments

Rating: 4.4

There once was a guy called King Big Head
Who tried very hard for PH cred`
But his poetry`s grim
`Cause he`s really quite dim
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Valerie Dohren
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Jak Black 08 January 2016

Okay, Valerie, I get the message. Nice limerick though. Well done.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 August 2012

A delightful read on your incisive limerick, loved the form and wit!

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Karen Sinclair 31 July 2012

this made me giggle (first thing in the morning) so early it took a while to get that you were actually writing about a real live soul.... a ken dod tickly stick moment lol....thanks val, hope the rest of my days this good even if its raining

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 July 2012

I actually start to admire KBH, because he behaves as AJ in wrestling ring. so hilarious to read his verses. I do not know who he/she is. He may be CC in disguise, definitely not Lawrence as someone wrote! Let him stay and entertain us. Nice poem Madam.

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Theodora Onken 27 July 2012

i laughed til' i cried. Love your limerick! Theo Onken

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Juan Olivarez 27 July 2012

we can now call him king shrunken head lol.

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Danny Draper 27 July 2012

I don't know of his crime be it legal or rhyme, but after being burned by Val, the King will need a long recovery time. Nice limerick, althought I don't know nor care to know its story, the poetry and mystery are sufficient to sustain my artistic curiousity while maintaining a healthy disinterest for fear of intellectual degradation by cross contamination.

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Captain Cur 23 July 2012

Long lived the King! Don't worry King your gonna get a lot of press from this one. Bad press is better than no press. A sense of humor goes a long way. Funny Val, now keep up the humor, stay away from the Saturian Rat Race.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 July 2012

Witty!

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And here I am thinking that Valeriue likes to read my scribbles...W E L L! ! ! ! ! ! ! lol! You certainly have a natural penchant for rhythmic, well metred limmerick...Thus, I shalt dub thee..The Limmerick Lass of PH! ~FjR~

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Hans Vr 20 July 2012

Nice and funny.

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Robert Green 20 July 2012

L.M.A.O. Thanks Val :)

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Dave Walker 20 July 2012

Ha ha like it, made me smile, the King wants me to write a poem with him, maybe I will, a great poem.

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Heather Wilson 20 July 2012

Laughing, Val , Laughing,

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King Big Head 20 July 2012

A truly fantastic title, as for the dim bit I'll have you know my servant can count to a thousand for me. I really like this val, thankyou.

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Joseph Anderson 20 July 2012

From over on my side iI would say AMEN and so it goes-right on

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