Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Kindred Spirits? Comments

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Looking around at earth's varisome face
We often feel lost in the masses of souls
Who surround us with life which appears wholely
To differ, from race to indifferent race,
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You pen this peace beautifully and ~FjR~ says so well as a commentary... so I just say in kindred spirit, touchingly, aroha Deana xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 December 2008

We as mortal beings, be us white, black, yellow, Catholic, Muslim, or atheist...have so much more commonground left to break...yet, ouyr fear of the differences, disallow us to take that pick, and drive it through the cement solid walls we continue to build in our psyche...and pass down to our children...tho' we tell them not to be that way...but it's our actions, that bleed deep into the veins of tomorrows leaders & societel influences.Your closing line is powerful....and spirits have been with us since God created life....but its open-end interaction, and flexibility, that we sorely need, on the part of us all, if we are to see some tangible indications of peace in our lifetime, and before we pass this very dim torch of co-existence, to our children. Another fine, thought provoking(as my rembling comment doth prove) offering, young lass! FjR

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Ency Bearis 01 October 2008

a wonderful wisdom of thoughts..well narrated and written..great poem.. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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David Threadgold 01 October 2008

Hi Fay One of a kind we humans and so well put by the wisdom of your pen. well done. a good read as always. Regards Dave T

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