Monday, March 7, 2016

Kindred Spirits Comments

Rating: 4.9

Our eyes met when we looked beyond the metal cage
A glance of uncertainty and of unknowing fear
Sitting side by side a bond was forged on life's stage
Injected into my heart you were one I held so dear
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Sven Rhoads
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Bharati Nayak 26 July 2017

We understand without words even being spoken Like the blowing winds have given us this token And no one will take it away, we'll be together in the coming days We entwined our souls and found the perfect match Locked behind closed doors, we were the key to the others latch And no one will keep us apart, we are kindred spirits at heart When time comes to call you home forever I will watch crimson tears fall from my stopping heart Let no angel wings of the whitest of all feathers Keep this love for you from where you now depart And in your memory I will etch into my skin - - - - - - Feelings of love expressed in so sublime and so glorious words- - - - -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 25 July 2017

When my bones turn to dust and breath expires I will find a way with our love's burning fire Wait for me at the fence - What a deep seated relationship, indeed! Elegantly expressed and heartily presented. Congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Rajnish Manga 25 July 2017

Great splash of emotions and longing as well as mourning for a departed friend. Thanks & Congrats When my bones turn to dust and breath expires I will come to see you again, but for now... not yet

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Jeanette Telusma 25 July 2017

Love so strong breaking mighty forces, beautiful write indeed.

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 July 2017

The intensity of love etched deep comes out strongly in this poem. Congrats for it being chosen as the member poem of the day.

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Tom Allport 25 July 2017

a wonderful poem of the power of true love transcending this physical world? ................well written S.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2017

Such an awesome and touching poem... congrats on being chosen, Steven....Rated 10+++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 July 2016

Heartiest Congrats on the member poem of the Day.

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Geoffrey Fafard 25 July 2016

Not many poems instil in me a need for a physical reaction.But this time I gave her an extra hug, pat and sat with her a few minutes longer.She has, after all, given me 12 amazing years… Beautiful poem of the day.Thank you Sreven

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Kim Barney 25 July 2016

Wonderful poem. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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M Asim Nehal 25 July 2016

Brilliant poem, nicely written, the story line is very interesting and the bond between the man and a dog nicely explored.

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Kelly Kurt 25 July 2016

I love dogs. This poem touched my heart. Congrats, Steven

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Darwin Henry Beuning 25 July 2016

Steven, It is grand to find a soulmate and walk this road called Life hand in hand. A most deserving 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

Sitting side by side with the muse of love. Great work! Thanks for sharing.

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