Tuesday, December 30, 2014

Kindred Spirit Comments

Rating: 5.0

My beloved your sweetest smile
Takes me to that ecstasy
Where I touch for a while
Your fragrance and ask for mercy
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 January 2015

Beautiful tribute to Allah, our Almighty. Without him and his love alone in the world a man can never sustain. Beautiful love is expressed through Kindred Spirit. Nice one.

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Mj Lemon 05 January 2015

Such a wonderful poem....touching fragrance....so well said.

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Alesia Leach 01 January 2015

Stunning! Let us together touch the sky my favorite line.

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Yasmin Khan 31 December 2014

The verse is a beautiful tribute to a kindred spirit that is lost in exile but kindles the poet's heart with passions. It is nigh and far at the same time.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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