You are the one who let me stay still here
I am alive pretty beautiful because of you my dear
I don’t know which can I explain
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Dear Poet, Through out the poem I read your approaching to the God Almighty. May God bless you....
Luwi my sister in Jesus...English is not your first language but you write eloquently...you put you into your poems that is what makes you so unique.. maybe just change one line.....'It is to hard and too lot to clarify' to...it is too hard and too much to clarify......don't ever stop writing.... Alf
Jesus pay me a cost for my salvation............ ... .God still knows what is yet best a we flow in life by the quest.................as we blaze glory of Almighty God from of consciousness until our last dregs of breath yet earthly, quite ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing
I being a peace wisher poet with 6 book and peace willing ideads, , , love your this poem..specially this stanza... lovely...10 ++++++++++ You are ever best of the entire universe For the payment of our bad you dropp us peace
An excellent compliment to God. Beautiful composition. Love it with 10+++
very gooooooooooooooood dear Luwi, God is our Saviour and it's by His Grace and Love that we still live. God bless, Your sister in Christ