Kindled Spirit Comments

very colourful writing, lots of variety and exuberance, good job.

I am thankful that I never became addicted to roasted Scarlett, maybe because our Southern Sun is way hot. But I certainly see the humor (and danger) of roasted Sister. Keep it up, because I love to laugh. Scarlett

Very funny and clever - reminded me of my sister, Blanka, one summer. She has since become wiser - the fear of skin cancer I suspect. avr

great poem, got every thing that I love humor (first degree) I have a forty two year old son, who is a bricklayer and a Sun God. Ccheers sylvia 10+

What a wonderfully amusing poem! Congratulations! I just love it and gaveyou a 10.

Very witty and lively! I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for the laugh.

Ouch! This is really quite hilarious, is your sister living in merry cold England? Very pleasant, uplifting reading, humour that this site needs. Thank you. H

Very clever, very light. A few meter problems, but overall a delightful ditty. Terrific title.