Kind Gesture Comments

I can see some kind of charity and kindness in this poem

Real tribute coming from the heart of a Innocent child, nice work,10+

'All I need is your kind gesture Nothing in particular or bright future It may follow with your simple grace' these lines speak meaningfully what is needed more than anything else in this world!

You have packed so much into this poem, but the greatest things to me of your kind gesture are to be humble and help the poor and needy. Also, to respect all religions irrespective of faith. I feel we are all here in the world to help one another irrespective of religions and to recognize God, and that to me is love and wholly light. Thank you for such a detailed poem hasmukh and for sharing your work with me....10 love Karin

'May find your blessing even in failure Ailing mind to have definite cure Not to cheat others and attempt to lure Double the efforts to make win shot sure'...the last line is nicely penned..''double the effort to make shots sure'....so nice dear....there are so many kinds of gestures..the nicest is the kind gesture that u express here in your piece..all other stanzas fit and supports the title well...