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This is really fascinating, i read pains and sweetness in these lines. 'Red rings of blood and loneliness' this line is really fascinating.

Nicely expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions.....

good for revision thank u

was a nice read

a lighthouse poem, fine art

in my buthole

recollection of childhood days

there is excruciating beauty in these lines as well as excruciating pain and sorrow- a portrait of life

excellent piece................it is enjoyed fascinating

A most enlightening write. Gets to the heart of the matter. Enjoyed.