Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Killing Time Comments

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Killing time
‘Cause time don’t mind
Time never stops
Just has the sun never drops
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Vincent Dali
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Amber Vasquez 07 April 2009

I found this poem as wonderful as your others. Keep writting!

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Excellent write Vincent....good flow to this...10

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I think this is a good writing, although the rhythm is a little affected by some of the wording which can easily be fixed. Overall, a nice piece. GW62

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