Sunday, October 7, 2007

Killing Time Comments

Rating: 2.0

Shut your mouth
Shut your mouth
Learn to speak
or shut your mouth
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Michael Romero
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Kory Beach 07 October 2007

It has good rhythm and rhyme, but where is the meaning in it? The poem seems so empty full of threatinging remarks that are weak and powerless in prose.

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