Killing The Female Stereotype Comments

Im gonna be real here because I want you to improve you might have gotten better with writing but this poem is too straightforward and simple use figures of speech and symbolism your first part should have been your last part because it had the most impact because of just because I'm a girl I'm really just here because of an assignment and I'm no expert either I just wanted to voice this out and be of help to you

'...all I do is twirl In a dress Just because I'm a girl' thats my favorite part of the poem. I can really relate to this poem.

nice poem storm..very inspirational..more women need to come forward and go against the stereotype and just be who they are...more power to you girl.

THAT IS THE BEST POEM YOU HAVE WRITTEN.....REMINDED ME A LOT OF ME....IT WAS REALLY GOOD.....YOU MIGHT BECOME FAMOUS ONE DAY...lol.... Keep Writing

you must be a gothic girl.