Monday, September 21, 2020

Killing The Deathless Comments

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I went hunting treasure in words and deeds
They say the ocean fathoms miles deep
Holding immense treasure in the depths
I find no depths nor any hidden treasure
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Savita Tyagi 12 June 2022

I will be coming back to read it again, simply to dive deep in the beautiful world of poetry.

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Savita Tyagi 12 June 2022

Very impressive and thought provoking poem. all the truths or lies, pain or pleasure all that we have to express or reconcile is present in this beautiful poem.

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Terry Craddock 24 September 2020

A Mirage Wavers In The Distance that which we cannot reach obtain is like a mirage it wavers in sight distance like heat waves on a hot day it is illusion the closer we get the more it moves away Inspired by the poem 'Killing The Deathless' by the poet Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair. Dedicated to the poet Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair.

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Thank you Terry Craddock. If we go searching the truth in other's words and deeds we can only see the dead truth floating above

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Terry Craddock 22 September 2020

'I went hunting treasure in words and deeds They say the ocean fathoms miles deep Holding immense treasure in the depths' that which we cannot reach obtain is like a mirage, it wavers in the distance like heat waves on a hot day, but it is illusion the closer we get the more it moves away

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Thank you very nuch poet Terry Craddock. Warm welcome for your precious comments. Truth is like a mirage, the nearer we go the farther it appears, you are correct

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Kostas Lagos 21 September 2020

Impressive piece of poetry! Thanks for posting!

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Thank you dear poet Kostas Lagos for spending your precious time on my poems

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 September 2020

A deep philosophical poem on life. Lies and dishonesty have become norms of the day. People try to get filthy rich resorting to unfair means. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much dear AKP. Its a waste to believe the words and deeds of others. They kill truth and it floats dead. It gives no result if we go hunting the truth.It has become nthe life style of people to deceive others and away their treasure.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 September 2020

Truth floats dead, they say death is inevitable Killing the deathless makes whose bread! .... Excellent poetic expression

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Thanks a lot dear Mahtab. Ships-full of hopes are sunk to the bottom of the ocean of harsh words and treacherous deeds. To find out the truth is vain for truth floats dead leaving its empty shells along with the wreckage

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