Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Killing Me Softly Comments

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I love you more than I love myself
That's why I'm blind to everyone else
I like things that sharing markings of you
But I love you and only you
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Anita Khelawan
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2016

That kisses in the naked snow will kill many hope you know mostly men vie and gals sigh who will kiss this way and why I shall place my self on the altar of love, if someone can come and kiss me the way you two do above. I love kisses what can I now do I am sans breath and love too as my kisses are now like probing poison a misadventure now no one kisses me here or there but I love all those who still kiss the way we did dear miss... I can feel your kiss as my spine shivers I quiver Alas at some point of age we have to deliver the realities of love that life does deliver... kissers we were

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Kewayne Wadley 17 February 2016

Lovely written. Overflowing with self worth and the ambition to love. The will to follow desire. Thanks for sharing :) KW

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Atasha Williams 16 February 2016

You look like you have sooooo much love to give Anita, I pray that you find that special person who deserves all that love, til they feel like the lucky one being with you....

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Anita Khelawan 16 February 2016

thnx you Atasha

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 10 February 2016

it seems to be a real feeling...of love... unfinished definition.. but you might realize it in future differently, if the writer may avoid the moment of suffering

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