Monday, July 23, 2007

Killing Machine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beauty of an instrument of death
Behold my kingdom, it is I who reigns
A blast of hot air emits from my breath
Arabian blood in my silver veins
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Amera Andersen
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 June 2015

Wonderfully crafted to maintain the suspense ill the end. Like it very much.

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Ranjit Ravindran 11 October 2009

Wow.. You maintained suspense till the last line... marvelous.. The title and the remaining verses prepared me to expect a lethal weapon used in conventional warfare. In the end its just a lawn mover! Beautiful. Makes me remember O. Henry! A sweet 10.

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David dfsg 23 July 2007

Wonderfully written, and what a great finish. Awesome poem.

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