Killing Fields Comments

powerful closing lines- well done images throughout

Love to the humanity is the underlined theme here and wars against the spirit of life and also dreadful. Great thoughts.

Reality unveil in this write, thought provoking!

Strong message; speaks truth; really engages reader and evokes them to visualize the situation word by word; sticking

Watch grammar and punctuation, but apart from that it's a very vivid and compelling read. I particularly like the last line. Thanks for sharing!

To (too) tired to eat......? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Picturesque and a saddened too,

An excellent and potent write. In war there are really no winners. Even the crows and eventually the buzzards are the ultimate victors. There can never be any joy and if there is it is short lived. make peace and not war. very inspiring.

Not bad...you may mean too tired, not to tired

great piece! Very expressive :)

Wicked! Good stuff.

powerful write, war, the curse of mankind.

What a great way to get us to see the way of wars. that crows are the winner. however. it is sad that wars are necessary.: (. even animals and all the earth hates war. but we must. because of the enemy.

Your depth of wisdom here is amazing, in that you have painted such a clear picture of who the real winners are in a battle, the crows. The contrast of the pain of those left dying and the victory celebration is just great. A MAJOR 10 from me!

POWERFUL PIECE OF WORK, MARILYN...FINE IMAGEWORK...I LIKED THIS PIECE A LOT....SOLID PENNING''''''''''''''''''''FJR

WOW what an amazing picture this poem paint,10 for Tiyler, keep this up! !

Wow nice Marilyn did you see the 'fall of Roam' last night? ? hihihi Love dave xxx