Sunday, April 20, 2008

Killing Children Comments

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Every minute that passes by,
I can see the drops of blood fall,
The running river that flows down my arm,
That spreads out across my hands,
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Chelsea Lybbert
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Tess Bybee 20 January 2009

Wow, this poem is really dark, but the message is very clear and powerful. It evokes emotion, which is what I love to see in poetry. Great job.

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