Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Killin Me Comments

Rating: 3.5

how do i know to trust you again
you hurt me one to many times
you broke too many promises
lie after lie
...
Read full text

Danielle Smtih
COMMENTS
Wesley Mincin 28 July 2009

I think this poem is alright. I can see that you have seen and tasted the bitterness of love (haven't we all) and it seems that you've done a bit of bleeding onto the paper, which, to me, is good.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success