Killer of Love
I am the worst sinner
More dangerous than Hitler
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To be imprisoned by the mistakes of the heart, often a life sentence to serve in regretful solitude. You have penned the pain so clearly....and with an honest longing to recapture the goodness og love lost. Thoughtful and poignant poem.
A true love is essence to drive us in our life.....You made your point very clear with this poem that love is the only thing which can change the world around and make it a beautiful place to live on.Thanks for sharing.10+
Composition of the poem is okay! Without knowing the meaning of word you cannot write exactly what you are thinking and so, please pay attention to it before writing a poem or line. Yes, love cannot flourish without reciprocation. We must respect and honour true love!
Good write, Shakil. Hope you get another chance when you can make amends for your callous behaviour. Pray for such chance. I have a suggestion if you won't feel offended. Check the correct meaning of words before using them. For instance, profane has an opposite meaning and cannot go with pure.
To be imprisoned by the mistakes of the heart, often a life sentence to serve in regretful solitude. You have penned the pain so clearly....and with an honest longing to recapture the goodness of love lost. Thoughtful and poignant poem.