Inside me....
A killer is king...
This reign will make me strong...
Strong enough to heal my wounds...
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That killer still inside me in my grave. That's the coolest line. Now I'm also thinking to write poem on such a theme. good work!
u r a killerrrrrrrrrrr oMG... hahaha am ovr laughing... but nice work but dnt want u to kill any one broh...
This is a very powerful write. If you would put all of that pent up emotion in your poems and keep penning it makes for very positively charged writes. You're an excellent Poet.
Dark and deep....deff my cup of tea....keep writing those words...let that anger out and it shall free you! ! !
i like..it shows all the emotions that you have bottled up and how you see yourself. it sorta reminds me of my poems but yours is more structured and planned. nice job
Dark poem is not my cup of tea but I don't know why I liked it
Very dark. I love emotion put in this poem. I was very tragic but nicely put. good job.
rage is something you wanna avoid but you always get stuck to it no matter what you want........brilliant way to show the fact thank you for sharing
That is a deep, deep poem! ! You seem to want to have a lot of anger and stuff to get out of yourself - I say that you should get it out in a HEALTHY way :)
Go drill your purple heart... Then feel your mouth with all those money you'll save... Killer inside me. Silence and emancipation at the end...... a great poem . strange thoughts with substance...... it makes one think. thank you dear poet