Monday, December 3, 2012

Killer Inside Me Comments

Rating: 4.6

Inside me....
A killer is king...
This reign will make me strong...
Strong enough to heal my wounds...
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Utsav Patel
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

Go drill your purple heart... Then feel your mouth with all those money you'll save... Killer inside me. Silence and emancipation at the end...... a great poem . strange thoughts with substance...... it makes one think. thank you dear poet

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Ayesha Tul Kubra 04 August 2014

That killer still inside me in my grave. That's the coolest line. Now I'm also thinking to write poem on such a theme. good work!

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Mary Amrutha 26 November 2013

u r a killerrrrrrrrrrr oMG... hahaha am ovr laughing... but nice work but dnt want u to kill any one broh...

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

This is a very powerful write. If you would put all of that pent up emotion in your poems and keep penning it makes for very positively charged writes. You're an excellent Poet.

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Aya Nasr 01 September 2013

you killed me inside hahahaha i loved it, good lines

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Zeenat Fatima 29 December 2012

A very deep thought! Well said..

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Darkangel Flyfree 09 December 2012

Dark and deep....deff my cup of tea....keep writing those words...let that anger out and it shall free you! ! !

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Brianna Winebarger 07 December 2012

i like..it shows all the emotions that you have bottled up and how you see yourself. it sorta reminds me of my poems but yours is more structured and planned. nice job

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Asif Andalib 05 December 2012

Dark poem is not my cup of tea but I don't know why I liked it

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Very dark. I love emotion put in this poem. I was very tragic but nicely put. good job.

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Supriya Prathapan 04 December 2012

The thinking of a delinquent beautifully expressed.

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Payal Parande 04 December 2012

rage is something you wanna avoid but you always get stuck to it no matter what you want........brilliant way to show the fact thank you for sharing

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Scarlett Outlaw 03 December 2012

That is a deep, deep poem! ! You seem to want to have a lot of anger and stuff to get out of yourself - I say that you should get it out in a HEALTHY way :)

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Utsav Patel

Utsav Patel

Surat, Gujarat, India
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