Saturday, April 10, 2021

Killer Dream~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

I rise from the ashes of my dream,
All in black and burnt with emote bream,
The wind is breathing high in spirit,
And the waves are dashing dead,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deepak S S 15 April 2021

Inspiring...A new song on my lips!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 April 2021

Good one. As long as you live nightmares will come to you. You don't have to go to them

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2021

My heart beats the drums very fast, O, scary night never returns with those dreams again.Very excellwntly worded, indeed, A Killer Dream! 5 Stars Full!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2021

Very powerful! I love the first line. Bravo!

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Captain Cur 10 April 2021

A stunning write, I particularly liked the line, The reality defeats the dream.

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