I'm five years old, I have a crush.
I pick a flower and give it to him.
'You're a killer, ' he says coldly.
I look down at the flower,
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Wow...this is deep. I really like it. From having a crush, to being a killer, to mourning your 'victim', to a lesson learned...this is a beautiful poem. You are talented. Keep it up.
Awwh, this is nice :) Lol, I liked the last few lines, it gave an ironic twist to the poem...nice write,10+ I'm at writer's block though...I've been like this for weeks already...D: