Killer Comments

I liked this write. It has all the elements of an archetypal condensed story in poem form.++10

It's a terrific poem! A little variation from Rini's other poems but a typical one quite insightful...thanks for sharing....10

The tale of a cold-blooded murder told well. Sadly some make like to make others suffer.

I was very much surprised by the ending of this poem. He was very cold-blooded to let her drown.

And he saw her drowning She called forhelp But noone turned...........................yes his hands are read............. from your usual romantic tunes you turned today to death...... it was strange for me.. to read it........ death, helplessness... purposeful........ cheating. killing. why? picturing life and love and its problems........ tony