Monday, October 18, 2010

Kill Myself For Her Comments

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The days that pass
that you had to miss
wishing you was here
so i can give you a kiss
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Steven Pimentel
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Saiom Shriver 24 April 2013

Yours is a very powerful poem about the pain of lost love which millions of us have experienced.. sooner or later God fills or melts away our desires

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C S 14 May 2012

i really like this one..... It's so sweet, honest and well written

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Joe Foster 14 May 2012

I went through this too. Its hard goin through it. I just tell myself it aint that serious. This will help someone else if there goin through somethin. nice poem.

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