Thursday, November 24, 2011

Kill Me Whole! Comments

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Slay me not with thy words my love
So cold and harsh, unfriendly were they!
Not the sharpest of daggers could mutilate a soul
For thine had ripped my heart out
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Iman Sadikeen
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Paul Brookes 24 November 2011

A lovely poem Beautifully written. However try and take the thees and thous out. It sounds better on the, not so archaic.

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Sri Lanka
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