Kill Me Comments

Powerful stuff Stef...loved it....wouldn't expect anything less from you..perfect poetry....and there are positive marks u have left on this world too btw! ! ! =)

Oh dear, your wonders and pains are deep, I know it on my skin! without a religion, we may be free to expand love in any direction that means that yes maybe we can have a heart without a religion. The biggest hearts most beautiful souls are those who were washed in tears and fed on pain those I would call humans with greatest love. The woman's grace and love are not a waste only because there's not a man. She will find ways to share and shine anyway...The aura of a swallowed pain came out in this deep poem, to be truly loved, thank you.

Religion have a heart? Contradictory question...religion are all books and pages and they therefore are allowed no hearts..some though to some extent tolerant but they are beyond religion normal humans...killing is an option for either sides and also the thing they want to kill

Very intellectual write, magnificent poem.. You are a great writer....

You got talent, kid. And a great deal of it, too.

Wow. This is dark. Great poem with a great flow. But very dark. Very good write.