Kilimanjaro Comments

I love the imagery in the first two verses-very descriptive and beautiful. Maybe the rest of the poem would benefit from further efforts to allow the poem to say in English what you said in your own mother language. The present translation makes it difficult to follow and to understand.

Very strong and powerful. Awesome imagery.10 Plus.

Commanding language, presenting a very view of conquering the odds both physical and mental strings of imposing walls, . You make the mountain a living being that shapes the destines of the people that crosses it, a fabulous depiction of natures all consuming child. A lovely read great closing.

this is so beautiful

Geography can inspire a beautiful image in poetry...it where two things together collided and written in this nice write..good imagery Adheez_Soul

I have my Kilimanjaro too.I is smaller than yours but is there i am brave and free, totally

Awe inspiring lines as the peaks are...a beautiful write.(It'd be good to give some notes about the title, members' comments guided what the poem is about)

Beautiful poem. Envokes emotions of awe and reverence for Nature's awesome beauty and God's supremacy. I guess Kilimanjaro is for Tanzania what Himalayas is for India.

Wow an awesome eulogy poem to d mountain very close to where i live. Hav u been there too, to pen such a fine apt one? Pls coment my latest nuts poem.

nice writing of a picture.. i enjoyed the theme

You have captured it's unique and spellbinding presence that uplifts with it's timeless beauty! !