Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Kiki Comments

Rating: 5.0

The town square was tepid in the early morning light.
Tea for two and a squirrel begging for food.
Serenity transposed on a single blade of grass.
A moment's pause in a possible lifetime.
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mimi brown
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Val Morehouse 22 October 2009

Simply a superb poem. I enjoyed every line. Its a 10 from me as well. Val

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Ian Bowen 15 September 2009

Mimi, it always amazes me how this will slip through with maybe just a single comment (mine) . You really should look for a better place, where your wonderful work will be appreciated. Kiki, is both well written and easy to understand. You are (and I say it again) too good for this fractured site.10/10 and a Fav. Regards, Ian

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