Saturday, March 28, 2009

Kigo Entries (Versions) Comments

Rating: 5.0

White bunny
shadow on snow scares
running rabbit
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Maria Barbara Korynt 10 April 2009

Very much subtle you are writing. I like it. Thanking for your commentaries, I will leave three mixy (haiku) written for you - on the basis of your miniatures. It is your, but differently it I wrote. I am greeting. :) Maria Barbara Korynt ------------------- 1. the yellow lotus grows quickly crowned by stars shining on the sky 2. nodding the green reeds and now, turn brown in the sun, it smiling summer 3. dreams claim souls floating in the fresh colours rainbow chatters to deaf stone

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John Weber 07 April 2009

For me, I enjoy the wording of the #2 varients, Lorraine, but such matters are only bound by selective taste. The flow from the colorless hidden to the colorful obvious moves me to appreciation of the nuance and the evolution evident in nature. Humans never blend so adeptly to our surroundings! Warm regards, John.

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