Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Kids Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! You are a little black boy,
and playing with your small toy.
Oh! You are black from outside,
but your heart and soul are white.
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PandaPro (STUDENT) 07 October 2020

This is amazing! I wish I could write poems as good as you!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 November 2010

Indeed adorable kids are n’ equally well penned enjoyed this poem much… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010

kids are the best.... they dont know how to hurt and they make u smile deep down... great poem...

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Brilliant...so well penned. Everything I stand for! All children are blessings from above. Well done my friend! ; D

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good done Dear Merna u r talented! that's it 'NO FOR RACISM' this beautiful poem reflects your kindness... a 10

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Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

merna! ! ! ! u have 2 let people know ur talent, as 4 me i see u as a famous poet u r really talanted noone in ur age write this deep feelings that u have u should write in magazines or newspaper u really should i'm not kiddin! ! ! ! <3 <3

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Sara Here 13 August 2009

Magnificent idea, brilliant writing and a superior theme.... can't pass by any of your poems without stopping a struggle inside to give a comment.Yet take it for all that is written and is to come I truly love your poems...

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Kuji Soliman 08 July 2009

i loved the poem so much! ! ! ! and i also think'NO FOR RACISM' is nothing but fair! ! and the last few lines in the poem are spectacular! ! ! pls keep on the good work, , ,10000000/10! ! ! ! ! and if you dont mind i would like to appologize to all of the poets thati've stopped getting in touch with...it's just cuz these past few days have been a little difficult! !

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Afzal Shauq 06 July 2009

You and the whole children are a bless had been granted from the Lord. And I consider you all as a noble reward. a good and impressive poems written on hids..yes they deserve to be praised and loved...its really a good poem..and flow is melodic and interesting one... appreciate you for good job merna...10+++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 June 2009

'Oh! You are black from outside, but your heart and soul are white'... nice expression there Merna...poetic...i liked the good message you convey through your good piece...thanks...10

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this is just lovely. you are indeed a fine young poetess

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Reem Ehab 26 June 2009

Thanks Merna for this poem, You refreshed our feelings again towards Kids, they are a special gift that we should take care of, so u explained these things without making a difference between the Black or White and this is fair.

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Omar Ibrahim 26 June 2009

very good idea...........i give you 10++++ for your great work.........

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

For all the kids of the world..No to racism! Nice poetic protest...lovely penned! ! ! 10/10

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~ Jon London ~ 25 June 2009

brilliant piece to share...you are very talented young lady...keep them coming...excellent share

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

thank you i liked this poem it made me smile good job

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

Oh! You are a little black boy, and playing with your small toy. Oh! You are black from outside, but your heart and soul are white. well done..this poem shows that you are great humanitariun and love every child of adam family and never care for colors, regions and cultures... thisis very good approach and I dream if we all think like that and bridge up the gaps between each others hearts being the humankinds and true cousins..appreciate you merna dear for this sweet poem...10+++++++++++++++++++

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rago rago 24 June 2009

wonderful write........ certainly kids are gifted.........

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Carol Gall 24 June 2009

beautiful merna no racism i agree color shape nothing matters but we all are gods childrten 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 June 2009

Blessed is Merna, who penns beatiful poems.........................a good write.......thanks for sharing.................keep up the good works...............10+++........

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