Saturday, October 31, 2009

Kiddies Party Comments

Rating: 4.9

The kiddie’s party’s underway
The titchy ones have come to play
Criteria for getting in
You must be three and love a din
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stephen stirk
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Jenny Sherman 08 January 2010

I do hope tat this isnt what i have to look forward to as i have a 1year old son, really good poem once again you are really creative love jenny x

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Alison Cassidy 26 December 2009

And all this without alcohol! This one takes me back to plates bursting with cocktail frankfurts 'we always referred to them as little boys' and the inevitable tomato sauce; a carpet strewn with meringue (it's amazing just how far four eggs and a cup of sugar will go) . And from what I remember the guest of honor invariably had the worst time. Your 'Kiddies Party' is delivered with great wit and a skillful choice of language. You're quite a comedian, Steve. And quite a poet, too. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ernestine Northover 31 October 2009

Brilliant! You have captured the event admirably. They are an ordeal to get through. The sighs of relief when all have disappeared from view. Hilarious write. Smarties anyone? ? ? ? You might enjoy my poem 'A Family Christmas' page 2 or 3 I think. A grown up party, sort of! ! ! ! ! Thanks for this wonderful humour. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Carol Gall 31 October 2009

really good stephen hit it on the head 10

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Fay Slimm 31 October 2009

How do you do it Steve? - - of course we will never know but you do it so stylishly - - every time - - - another winner for me..... thanks for the smile.... Fay

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Daniel Kempson 31 October 2009

So good Stephen brought a welcomed smile this morning 10 Daniel

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Ian Bowen 31 October 2009

Stephen, this is a mini masterpiece. You hit the scene with accuracy. Loved the ending.10/10 and a fav. Regards, Ian

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