Kick Your Heels And Go Comments
A friend of mine
Thought she is number one
She is living
In a beautiful house
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Yes. Truth is quite harsh. But, "Kick your heels and go".. Do not brood on the ‘have-beens'
Poetry genius needs to be revisited and reread from time to time. And Rose Marie Juan Austin is that said genius. Another full score and richly deserved for a timeless poem. Thank you good Rose Marie and I wish you all the good virtues that this life and poetry can bestow on you and the loved ones around you. Take care.
Beautiful, compelling narration. Smiting love often brings strife.10+
A beautifully written poem with strong images and ending with some meaningful upbeat good advice. Loved it! ! 10++ and added to my favourites. Thank you Rose Marie for writing and sharing such a great poem.
Kick your heels and go...........different love demystified! A great poem.....brilliantly penned!
A very nice poem on a love story that became a fabrication. Very good advice, leave when you have got to go, kick your heels when the dream becomes a lie.
It is really a beautiful poem on love having haunting expression with nice diction and it has special attraction towards readers for which I have to revisit it.
She complements him In every aspect He promised She is the one The only one...........so touching with a nice theme regarding love. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10
I told her The words she hates to hear Kick your heels And go. She deserved these words, enjoyed the poem.
Very nice poem. This is the most worthwhile advice to anyone, who refuses to understand that he/she is being taken for a ride. The last stanza is most well-phrased. Great.
Hahaha ., i told her The words she hates to hear.,, Loveeeely manang ko Rose..
She is slowly being killed By the emotional strife In her life. - - Marriage can be a prison at its worst..Vivid depiction and very realistic.Thanks for sharing with us.
A wonderful comment, Perdita. Thank you so much for your time.
Good poem, thank you! Hahaha kick heels and go, sounds so simple yet such a complicated thing, so many millions of people should go, but in unloving relatioship keep. You are a good friend, keep helping her.
Thank you, Elena for your wonderful comment. Your visit is highly appreciated.
She always brags/her man was smitten/by her loving ways/that she is the air/that he breathes. Lovely expression, a poem well dressed!
Such a wonderful comment, Dr. Dillip. Thank you for the visit.
Love shows emotional views in heart and chases us, , you have wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us
Devotion to others can often keep you from fulfilling the desires of life. Always better to let a fox go than to try and tame him. You're the only one who can find your true happiness. Your friend has a very wise friend. Thank you Rose.
A very interesting comment, Chris. Liked it. Thank you for the visit.
Some are blinded by love. Even though they know the truth they still deny it and live in self denial. Only a friend can tell them the words they dreaded to hear which is the truth. A well executed write Rose. Happy New Year! Nudershada
Your great comment is much appreciated, Nudershada. Thank you for the visit and Happy New Year.
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7/23/2025 1:49:00 AM # 1.0.0
The last stanza is of paramount importance.