Saturday, January 6, 2007

Kick It Out! Comments

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Tired of being 'tired' and drained?
Keeping things the same...
With the hope of these things changing?
You can rearrange them in your mind.
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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R R 06 January 2007

Hi Lawrence, Pretty tough poem. Yes alot of people get trapped in their own surrounding. Very realistic, excellent write. Take care.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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