Thursday, June 14, 2012

Khwaja Garib Nawaz - Before Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

A column of light rises from here to havens,
Scattered exhaust but no pigeons or ravens,
Visible is only light blue clouds in the deep
While black night quietly tucked in asleep,
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Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani
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Karen Sinclair 16 June 2012

Hi there is a beauty in innocence in words through your eyes... i felt just sheer joy and that all is well whilst reading this piece... tyvm karen and thanks for my review...

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Marieta Maglas 15 June 2012

wonderful descriptive poem, lovely rhymes

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Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani

Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani

Mumbai, India.
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