Monday, March 19, 2018

Khuje Paoya - Finding You (Translation In English) Comments

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I gave you a lot of love,

Myself received so much,
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Mahtab Bangalee 11 February 2020

In a song from my childhood, In those playful moments of bliss, It is inseparable from my heart. I have found you, I have found myself! ! /// beautiful loving poem; I've read it's Bengali version; excellent lonely loving expression

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 March 2018

t is inseparable from my heart. I have found you, I have found myself! ! Longing continues in spite of passing phases and ages. Lovely poem. Thanks for the trans-creation for us. Regards. Subhas

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Thank you, Subhas, for your comments, which I look forward to. I, honestly, loved the language in the original Bengali poem, but felt delighted to know you enjoyed the translation. I translated the poem, specifically because some of my poet-friends might be interested. Wondering if the language from Orissa and Bengali are similar! Best wishes, Malabika

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Yes Ma'am, Odia and Bengali are languages that appear like two sisters born from the same womb but brought up at two different places. I have forgot Bengali Scripts, which my papa in my teen days made me learn. If you add the poem in English script, I shall be able to read and enjoy, as I understand the language but can't read it. Regards. Subhas

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