Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Keyboards Of Inner Piety Comments

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Quiet mysteries hiding behind latent feelings, knowing that
they will eventually show themselves.

Playing keyboards of inner piety, letting it be transposed
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 24 June 2015

Your first stanza is a vision of another cosmic place, but the last stanza evokes the world of our being in all its charm. The impression I get is that this is a visionary place you evoke in stanzas 1 & 2, eventually if we display the appropriate faith or piety we will reach. And then hopefully we can take in the whole wonderful world into our consciousness.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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