Sunday, March 20, 2016

Key West Madonna Comments

Rating: 5.0

The girl in blue upon the sand
intrigues me like this southern land.
She always smiles as if to say
that I could speak but words betray.
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Barry Middleton
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Norah Tunney 20 March 2016

Beautiful poem! ! She always smiles as if to say that I could speak But words betray Ah! ! A longing to be small and Free the tide lets go and let's me be So appreciative for this poem It's the space between the words that says it all

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Barry Middleton 20 March 2016

Thank you again. Glad you liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Wow...wonderful to have a read of 1975 poem that is written long back. Longing to be small and free expresses wise humor and this is entirely fantastic sharing really.10

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Barry Middleton 20 March 2016

Glad you liked it. I have been writing poetry for about 50 years. This is one of my favorites.

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