Key To Happiness Poem by Rini Shibu

Key To Happiness

Rating: 5.0


What we expect we may not get
And what we get is what we never expect
Better not to expect too much
So that we won't be disappointed
If it's meant for you it will come to you
And If not it will leave you
We may also lose what we possess
But we should not be afraid of the loss
Because what we have is not ours
We came to this world bare handed
And so we have to leave empty handed

Sunday, February 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 18 June 2018

An excellent philosophical write. Impressive.++10

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 February 2018

Hi Rini, Very philosophical this time! ! The desires of man are for ever: As Poonthanam has written in Njanappana, Onnu Kittukil Nooru Mathiyennum..... But, life should be built on contentment; one should never compare our life/fortunes with that of other and allow discontentment to spoil our life. But setting achievable goals and working hard for attaining those, are important. Good write. Congrats! !

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thank you so much for reviewing..

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Lamar Cole 05 February 2018

Great poem about key to happiness.

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Rini Shibu 05 February 2018

Thanks Lamar for your comment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2018

A very insightful write that echoes a strong message about happiness. Beautifully crafted.10

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks Rose.! !

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Practicing Poetess 04 February 2018

Very true poem written with much insight! Liked it so much, that I'm saving it to my favourite poems! :)

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Thanks dear poetess.! !

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